 imemine
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Date: July 30, 2004 @ 11:07 PM
Real!!!! Great chord progression but sorry, I can’t hear the vocals. Love the suspension at the end! Perhaps the emotion that created the song (just a guess considering the title) rushed this to release? Hell, I don’t know, maybe it’s my ears??????  
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 tsand19151
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Date: July 30, 2004 @ 11:12 PM
Yes, the vocals need to come up. I'm listening on tiny laptop speakers so maybe that's the problem. Anyway, nice music. 
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 DevonPowell
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Date: July 31, 2004 @ 12:08 AM
I want to talk to you about this track at some point elsewhere...not so much post comments in this space.
Suffice to say here that I think this song has a lot of potential in all honesty and I'd love to get to it if you wouldn't mind letting me work with you on it some. 
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 Hummbugger
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Date: July 31, 2004 @ 1:20 AM
Thenks for posting the lyrics in the info session. You've got a lot of emotion in this song and I think it works quite well.
I think that a collaboration with DevonPowell would put it over the top.
Great job!!
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 cosmicearthgirl
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Date: July 31, 2004 @ 2:13 AM
I love that your music is so unhibited. There's a beautiful freedom to it that you just don't hear in conventional pop music much anymore.
I'd love to hear you do something with Devon so we could hear your wonderful voice! 
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greatscottpr...
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Date: July 31, 2004 @ 3:52 AM
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andrewbiles
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Date: July 31, 2004 @ 4:19 AM
I'm confused, were you using the bloke or something?
It's a bit early right now, so I'll read the lyrics again later, but that's what I got.
Anyway, it's a very good song, again. Like people have mentioned though, the vocals definately need to come up a bit, but that's the only slight problem with the song.
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 deane
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Date: July 31, 2004 @ 6:04 PM
The lyrics are so good!! I can really feel the emotion there.
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Dave4288
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Date: August 1, 2004 @ 4:46 PM
Nice chord progression but its almost like your voice is too nice and sweet to sing a song like this lol
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dkeifer
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Date: August 1, 2004 @ 6:33 PM
If you can raise this much hell with just a guitar you really don't have much else to worry about musically.
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richandisaac
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Date: August 2, 2004 @ 4:04 AM
put the vocals up in the mix! the guitar has too much mid/treble and overpowers the vocals.
its a good song, just needs some work. well done!
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Dolleater
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Date: August 5, 2004 @ 2:35 AM
Great title. Downloaded it right away, cause im a pervert inn'it.
Recording vocals, trial and error.
I'm glad Devon's giving the song life beyond the demo stage. Look forward to the results.
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MarcSalmon
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Date: August 7, 2004 @ 5:14 AM
damn i love your voice, wish i could hear it more though. well done though, great tune. 
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AppleJuice
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Date: August 7, 2004 @ 11:53 PM
I really like your use of chords in this one. That'd be awesome to add some drums and bass to this one. This is great stuff, lyrics have a lot of depth and feeling, then guitar brings the message forth with with beautiful sounds of acoustic guitar. Great track!
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chrismacmanus
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Date: August 8, 2004 @ 2:52 PM
I've finally got round to listening to this after reading the lyrics a while ago 
Good song, very nice vocals - though they are a little low at first.
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BedroomSessions
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Date: August 10, 2004 @ 9:14 AM
this is pretty good, vocals do need to come up a bit. what concerns me though, is that sick 60 year old man style throat clearing at the start. if you want help send me a dmusic note, i know good medicines.
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deanglover
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Date: August 11, 2004 @ 12:01 PM
hehehe... smokes 20 marlboro a day and sits in the bus stop until tea time.
only kiddin... the tone of the acoustic is very nice... i and your voice is well good 
but yeh the vocals need turnin up
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newen
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Date: August 11, 2004 @ 2:14 PM
Excellent but I can't hear you voice... This is real cool! Could you post the Lyrics? That'll be nice!
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badlywritten...
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Date: August 13, 2004 @ 3:04 AM
wow.
fuck, u go girl
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Tudris
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Date: August 21, 2004 @ 10:09 PM
Sweet song... the voice and guitar go well together, but as mentioned above, the vocals need to come up in the mix... other than that, good stuff!
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T-Boi
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 4:56 AM
U hum...
I love your voice singin on this, but cannot hear your vocal clearly, but the chords and singing tune are well indeed. this will be a good song to record perfectly...
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Woof
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Date: August 26, 2004 @ 3:34 AM
You know, I can't wait 'till you begin doing a couple more collabs... Marc's right... I love your singing... and a pull all the stops production of this would be simply wonderful!
Keep going... I'll keep listening...
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Jennae
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Date: August 26, 2004 @ 9:54 PM
I have heard much about this song.. and I know taht your lyrics are beautiful.. I had a preview of another version of this  you have talent sweetie keep up with the good work
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 Dizeazed
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Date: September 7, 2004 @ 1:51 AM
Awesome melody!!! I wish your vocals were a bit higher, though. I could bob my head to this... pretty good strummin', ladyacoustic.
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JFF
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Date: September 10, 2004 @ 2:27 PM
This one has potential to be a fantastic track i reckon.
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Fingerpilot
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Date: September 28, 2004 @ 12:16 AM
Neat! I like this one!
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Pagan
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Date: November 9, 2004 @ 2:47 PM
very cool and i love the title!
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ChandlerAshari
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Date: November 13, 2004 @ 10:49 AM
This song is great, girl! Could be a hidden track in your debut album.
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 moam
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Date: November 16, 2004 @ 5:18 PM
Wow, the name just caught my attention  Very good song indeed though, I love the guitar, you sure have some GEEtar skills. Beautiful voice as well,  lyrics too 
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BOWILLIE
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Date: May 26, 2005 @ 9:07 PM
i agree!..cool tune!
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SimonWaldram
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Date: July 16, 2005 @ 6:59 PM
Brilliant, brutally honest lyrics and a fine melody and arrangement to boot.
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