 MarcSalmon
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 4:38 AM
jeez. great work. ur voice seems to be improving a lot. guitar is great. maybe u could experiment with some other strumming patterns?
well done though. talented  
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 freddemillio
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 4:42 AM
Beautiful song. Wonderful poetry. The melody and the beat are very emotional. I agree with Marc that sometimes the strumming pattern is a bit monotonous, but the core of the song still shows through and it's a nice composition.
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T-Boi
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 4:47 AM
Slick cool emotion. mad lyrics. and beautiful altern vocal. i think flat strumming is okay as long as it has emotion and do it with feeling. colies! 
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cosmicearthgirl
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 5:12 AM
I think these are your best lyrics yet! Did you multi-track this, or just sing louder than usual? You sound great! The vocal delivery is perfect, you're never out of tune, and you have such a lovely voice.  
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 Asecrettold
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 8:05 AM
yeah, i say some different strumming patterns, different phrasing on the vocals.
but yeah, from what ive heard, you're getting better all the time.
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dkeifer
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 8:39 PM
More cool stuff. I like the "where do I draw the line" part a whole bunch. And your recordings are getting so much better.
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 Alexi1337
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 9:28 PM
you are getting much more confident and better at sining while playing. And a fade out at the end? Damn, you're getting technically proficient as well. 
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Alexi1337
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Date: August 22, 2004 @ 9:28 PM
i meant to say singing 
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dogbitey
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Date: August 23, 2004 @ 2:41 PM
I haven't checked in for a while. sure glar i did. KT this one is great. you've been playing for eight months now? there must be an old soul within you. good lyrics, excellent singing and inflection, the guitar work is good, but the strumming doesn't match the sophistication of your words. i don't see it as a big problem, yet, as there is so much improvement from a few months ago...it'll only get better and richer. what you told me in the email this morning ,i think ,is right on. wow, you are GOOD.
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Woof
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Date: August 26, 2004 @ 3:24 AM
Now, THERE's that pretty voice!
For some reason, the term "sweet revenge" comes to mind... Angst is just soooo effective when it's delivered so girlishly... Your voice bounces and skips, even as it sneers the expletives... making for some great contrast... Love it!
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ebarbarella
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Date: August 26, 2004 @ 9:16 AM
 wow  very nice! love the vocals  love it! 
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 GTLive
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Date: August 26, 2004 @ 11:02 PM
Great Tune. Rockin'
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Radical0822
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Date: August 31, 2004 @ 2:28 AM
oooh did you get a new mic? the clarity definitely helps, and your writing is excellent as well as your voice, which had seemed to improve. and i really enjoyed how you changed the rhythm a little bit, it sounds different than your other songs. Great work there.
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 independentm...
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Date: September 4, 2004 @ 4:24 AM
Damn, you are even better on originals!
from: New Acousticgrrlfan
 :throb:
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 8111
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Date: September 8, 2004 @ 11:17 PM
You do sound damn good here. the lyrical content as well as the vocal delivery has a perfect blend of that "fuck off" spite/indifference you begin to feel after you're sick and tired of feeling hurt and shit on. Been there. Felt that.
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saetan
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Date: September 26, 2004 @ 2:44 AM
Love your lyric, the choice of words is wicked! Good stuff!
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novuselysium
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Date: September 26, 2004 @ 5:34 PM
Great song. Much better than the electric version, more raw energy and simple is sometimes better when it comes to production.
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BleedingDece...
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Date: September 27, 2004 @ 8:58 PM
Hey good job. I think this is a pretty cool song...keep it up..
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SapphireClear
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Date: October 18, 2004 @ 11:22 PM
I love the way your voice sounds in this one! It's clearer and not as whiney as some of the others (though I do enjoy the whiney-ness as well!) haha! Yeah I really like the lyrics too. very deep.
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bambieyes
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Date: July 7, 2005 @ 3:38 PM
when i heard it i imagined you playing it and everything seemed foggy like.. dark. open a window or something get some sunlight in the room when you are recording. unless you want it to be sorta gloomy, then you accomplished that very well. i liked it.
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